Old Time Flemish Crooner ~ revised
Old Time Flemish CroonerHe sports a gondolier's widebrimmed chapeau,old Charon ditched by moody Aphrodite -an ageing man, completely in the know,performing though with some routine delight.He moves...
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Dear Dutch, It may be down to my lack of understanding, but I found a few phrases rather odd, eg what sort of bite does a hatband have? The bite's not just there for the rhyme ,is it? (perish the...
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Hi Maz,Good points!I've rewritten quatrain 1 and I've placed "boringly" instead of "charmingly" (and "hooked" instead of "bored").Regards, Crispin "Sic vive tamquam cras moriturus, sic stude quasi...
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